Thursday, April 16, 2020

News report about the stolen Matariki stars

Hi, this is my report on Matariki stars for Literacy I hope you like it it frustrated me.

2 comments:

  1. Great work Dion! You really sound like a proper news reporter. I like how you come back after the break to update the story! Why did you find this frustrating?
    Keep up the great work

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  2. Hi Dion, I liked your Matariki presentation. It had some interesting information in it about the children stealing the stars and having to get someone strong with a gaff to put them back. Maybe next time you could say something about back after this break before going and coming back again. I liked the concept of a news report though. Keep it up. Sharron

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