Great mahi Dion! I like how you have used descriptive language to help to paint a picture with your words, it really helped me imagine what is happening in the story. Don't forget that after a full stop we always put a space before starting a new sentence. Keep up the great work.
Great mahi Dion! I like how you have used descriptive language to help to paint a picture with your words, it really helped me imagine what is happening in the story.
ReplyDeleteDon't forget that after a full stop we always put a space before starting a new sentence.
Keep up the great work.