Friday, May 1, 2020

My writing

Hello, this is some writing I did for blog contract which is a thing where we choose something to make for our blog I chose writing hope you enjoy.

3 comments:

  1. Hello Dion, I liked the photos the photos that showed the speeding race car, speed boat, and even the Monster trucks in your slide they were very cool. Maybe next time you could re-read your writing to check there are no missing words or punctuation. Keep up the good writing, Ms Peters.

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  2. Hi Dion, Nice job on your slide presentation. I liked the photos that you used, and I liked how there were different types of vehicles. Maybe next time just be careful that the color of your text can be easily read over the photos, although when I made the photo larger it was easier. Keep up the nice work.

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  3. Hi Dion, Nice job on your slide presentation. I liked the photos that you used, and i like how much car were there maby. could´v of tried to write more. keep up the good work.

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